Writing Workshop
Guided writing practice with model answer, structure and useful language.
Lesson objectives
- Plan and structure a stronger Cambridge C1 writing response.
- Use clearer argument, linking and register control.
- Recycle the unit language around populism, nationalism & democratic erosion into sustained writing.
Listen to the model audio before you answer the lesson tasks.
Task (Cambridge C1 Advanced, Part 2 style)
Question: Your lecturer has asked you to write an essay discussing the impact of rising nationalism on modern democratic institutions. You should discuss two of the following points: 1. The influence of populist rhetoric on political discourse. 2. The potential erosion of democratic checks and balances.
Write your essay (220-260 words). You should explain which of the two points you consider to be more significant and give reasons for your opinion.
Tips (en español)
- Structure: Para un essay, utiliza siempre una estructura de cuatro párrafos: Introducción (presentación del tema), Párrafo de Desarrollo 1 (punto A), Párrafo de Desarrollo 2 (punto B) y Conclusión (donde eliges cuál es más importante).
- Register: Mantén un tono formal y académico. Evita contracciones (don't, can't) y lenguaje coloquial. Usa estructuras pasivas o impersonales para sonar más objetivo.
- Linking: No te limites a usar firstly o secondly. Utiliza conectores de contraste y de transición complejos para que el texto fluya de forma natural entre ideas abstractas.
- Hedging (Cautela): En temas políticos, evita generalizaciones absolutas como "Nationalism is bad". Usa el hedging (it could be argued that..., tends to..., may lead to...) para mostrar sofisticación académica.
- Evaluación de ideas: No te limites a describir los puntos. Debes compararlos. El examen busca ver si puedes pesar la importancia de un factor frente a otro.
- Time management: Dedica 5 minutos a planificar el esquema de tus argumentos antes de escribir. Si escribes sin estructura, te perderás en la complejidad del tema y no cumplirás el límite de palabras.
Useful language
| # | Expression | Español | Audio |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | What immediately stands out is... | Lo que destaca enseguida es... | 🔊 |
| 2 | At first glance, the scene appears to... | A primera vista, la escena parece... | 🔊 |
| 3 | Whereas the first image suggests..., the second one points to... | Mientras que la primera imagen sugiere..., la segunda apunta a... | 🔊 |
| 4 | There is a striking contrast between... and... | Hay un contraste marcado entre... y... | 🔊 |
| 5 | The people seem to be dealing with... | Las personas parecen estar lidiando con... | 🔊 |
| 6 | It is highly likely that... | Es muy probable que... | 🔊 |
| 7 | One could infer that... | Se podría inferir que... | 🔊 |
| 8 | This might reflect a broader issue: ... | Esto podría reflejar un problema más amplio: ... | 🔊 |
| 9 | Although the setting is different, both images convey... | Aunque el contexto es distinto, ambas imágenes transmiten... | 🔊 |
| 10 | The overall impression is one of... | La impresión general es de... | 🔊 |
| 11 | This would be a useful example of... | Esto sería un ejemplo útil de... | 🔊 |
| 12 | I would argue that the second image feels more... | Diría que la segunda imagen resulta más... | 🔊 |
Model answer
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The Impact of Nationalism on Modern Democracy
In recent years, the global political landscape has been significantly reshaped by the resurgence of nationalist movements. This essay will examine how populist rhetoric and the erosion of democratic checks and balances contribute to this shift, ultimately determining the stability of modern governance.
One significant concern is the influence of populist rhetoric on political discourse. Often, leaders employ "us versus them" narratives to galvanise their supporters, frequently targeting minority groups or international institutions. While such rhetoric can create a strong sense of national identity, it tends to polarise society, making constructive political dialogue increasingly difficult. This division often undermines the very foundations of pluralistic debate.
Furthermore, the erosion of democratic checks and balances represents a more profound threat. As nationalist leaders consolidate power, they may attempt to weaken judicial independence or limit the freedom of the press to prevent opposition. If these institutional safeguards are dismantled, the transition from a democracy to an autocracy becomes a tangible risk. This systemic decay is arguably more dangerous than mere rhetoric, as it alters the legal framework of a nation.
In conclusion, while populist rhetoric serves to polarise the electorate, it is the erosion of institutional checks and balances that poses the more significant threat. While rhetoric shapes opinion, the weakening of institutions fundamentally dismantles the democratic process itself. Therefore, protecting the independence of the judiciary and the press must remain a priority to ensure democratic survival.
Marking checklist
- Content: ¿Has respondido a ambos puntos de la tarea y has indicado cuál es más importante? Se evalúa si la información es relevante y completa.
- Communicative Achievement: ¿El tono es formal y el estilo es adecuado para un ensayo académico? Se evalúa si el lector puede seguir tu argumento de forma profesional.
- Organisation: ¿El texto está bien estructurado con párrafos lógicos y conectores variados? Se evalúa la cohesión y la progresión de las ideas.
- Language: ¿Has usado vocabulario avanzado y estructuras gramaticales complejas (como la voz pasiva o el hedging) sin errores graves? Se evalúa la precisión y la riqueza léxica.