Mediation Task
Transfer information across contexts and registers using clear, natural English.
Lesson objectives
- Transfer key information clearly from Spanish into natural English.
- Adapt tone, audience and purpose more effectively.
- Summarise ideas about entrepreneurship & start-ups without sounding literal or translated.
Mediation
Basándote en la información proporcionada, redacta un correo electrónico informativo para tus colegas en la incubadora de empresas. Debes resumir los detalles clave del programa y recomendar si creen que deberían postularse, manteniendo un tono profesional pero entusiasta.
Texto original (español)
El programa 'Impulso Emprendedor' busca jóvenes con ideas innovadoras para lanzar su propia startup. El programa ofrece tres beneficios principales: primero, acceso a mentoría personalizada por parte de expertos del sector tecnológico; segundo, una pequeña subvención inicial para cubrir gastos operativos básicos; y tercero, la posibilidad de participar en ferias de networking internacionales. Sin embargo, los candidatos deben presentar un plan de negocio sólido y comprometerse a trabajar a tiempo completo en el proyecto durante los primeros doce meses. El proceso de selección es riguroso y solo se aceptarán cinco proyectos este año.
Imagen de apoyo
🖼️ 
Estrategias clave
- Identify the core information: distinguish between benefits and requirements.
- Paraphrase effectively: avoid copying the source text word-for-word to demonstrate C1 vocabulary.
- Adapt the tone: shift from a neutral informative text to a professional email format.
- Synthesise information: combine related points (e.g., benefits) to ensure flow.
- Structure logically: use an appropriate opening, body, and closing for an email.
- Target the audience: address your colleagues directly and provide a clear recommendation.
Audiencia de destino
your colleagues at a local business incubator
Respuesta modelo (English)
Subject: Exciting opportunity: 'Impulso Emprendedor' programme
Dear Team,
I am writing to bring an exciting opportunity to your attention regarding the 'Impulso Emprendedor' programme, which has just been announced. This initiative is designed to support innovative startups through several key advantages.
Participants will benefit from expert mentorship, initial seed funding to cover operational costs, and invaluable networking opportunities at international trade fairs. These resources could significantly accelerate the growth of our current projects.
However, we must consider the requirements before proceeding. Applicants are expected to submit a robust business plan and commit to full-time dedication to their ventures for the first year. Furthermore, as only five projects will be selected, the competition will be intense.
Given the high level of commitment required, I suggest we carefully evaluate our current business models. If we can demonstrate a solid plan and the necessary dedication, this could be a game-changer for us. I look forward to hearing your thoughts on whether we should move forward with an application.
Best regards,
[Your Name]